Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Comment on Chris R 10-14 Blog Treasure Hunting

chris i thought that your recent posts were amazing. In each post you showed some creativity, which was fun to read and it made this commenting enjoyable. There has been improvement from your earlier bloging which was also interesting to notice. some of the most interesting things that you had written down were the statistics on the research homework. how there are 6 billion people on earth and of those six, four billion of them have personal cell phones. also from that post you could make a paper using opposing health issues with technology.

All of the 10-14 were really good. the tone of your writing is very enjoyable, it is not like you are yelling at the reader, and i feel like i am having a conversation reading these. you don't seem to have to write an essay full of bullshit, what you write is short sweet and to the point.

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